Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Secret

An incredible start with exceptional writing. I love how Ava's emotions are vividly expressed.Only two chapters are out, but I'm already in love with the concept of this novel.

great novel author,it has great potential.... everything is perfect just don't drop it

Really great novel overall but my only problem is the story is slower than I thought (for me I guess

I had waited a bit to write my review, but here it goes.I personally really enjoy this story because it doesn't undergo too many drastic changes, yet it's not a "more of the same" kind of tale like I often see in many others. The author avoids repetitive scenes, choosing to summarize them or conveying what's happening through the MC's thoughts.I really like the main character precisely because he doesn't belong to the Bleach world. His actions and comments feel more realistic and plausible, not to mention he's not the typical character who knows how to do everything right from the start, which would make the story less engaging to read. If I had to draw a comparison, the MC's powers are somewhat reminiscent of Inoue's. They're pretty powerful, but due to the user, they're limited in certain aspects. For instance, the MC is a Fullbringer who can use his own abilities to become a hybrid of other races, but he doesn't do it right away, preferring to take things slowly for sheer convenience, since the other races can help him better control his fullbring.The way the MC interacts with other characters is quite enjoyable to witness.I try not to criticize the frequency with which the author releases chapters because, as the author himself mention, writing is a hobby. He is crafting the story for his own enjoyment, so sometimes chapters take a while to come out, and other times, multiple chapters are released at once.I'm really enjoying how the story is unfolding, so keep up the good work, author-san!!

Hrd-jika anda diterima di perusahaan ini berapakah gaji yang anda harapkan

"Okay mom, bye". she said as she hang up her phone.

"Mana aku tahu Dys, kau saja hanya mengatakan kalau dia pria sombong tanpa mengatakan siapa namanya. Aku heran.. Bukankah kau sudah bekerja disini selama sebulan. Tapi sampai saat ini kau baru tahu siapa Bosmu, dan parahnya kamu justru berdebat dengannya di kantor. Aku ucapkan selamat karena telah memecahkan rekor pegawai bertengkar dengan Atasan. Sekarang nasibmu benar-benar di ujung tanduk". Bianca berbicara dengan dramatis, membuat Gladys semakin kesal dan cemas.

"Am I that ugly?"